Your third photo is cropped really nicely, it successfully maintains a sense of mystery and intrigue. I am very curious as to what you captured in photo three.
I can see your effort in trying to unite these lines into engaging compositions. This works well in the first, second, and tenth photos (They remind me of your series work too). I think more variety of value would benefit a lot of these photos, especially if some of the darks were pushed further towards black.
Each photo has an interesting subject but I think by improving contrast within each photo (whether it be forms or light contrast) will make the overall work stronger.
I get a great sense a texture from most of your photos. I agree with Aya that by finding more contrast in your composition, the sense of texture could be heightened greatly.
Your third photo is cropped really nicely, it successfully maintains a sense of mystery and intrigue. I am very curious as to what you captured in photo three.
ReplyDeletePhoto #9, to me, is a really successful example of capturing "the undistinguished" and reflecting the overall mysterious mood of the subject.
ReplyDeleteI can see your effort in trying to unite these lines into engaging compositions. This works well in the first, second, and tenth photos (They remind me of your series work too). I think more variety of value would benefit a lot of these photos, especially if some of the darks were pushed further towards black.
ReplyDeleteEach photo has an interesting subject but I think by improving contrast within each photo (whether it be forms or light contrast) will make the overall work stronger.
ReplyDeleteI get a great sense a texture from most of your photos. I agree with Aya that by finding more contrast in your composition, the sense of texture could be heightened greatly.
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