The top image is great, but I'm very partial to panoramic images. You have a really good eye; the majority of these feel really well considered and have a professional vibe. The tenth image feels out of place as far as the subject matter is concerned, which is unfortunate because I think the "aftermath" of an event would have been a cool focus.
The more natural, less posed pictures are my favorites. I think they fit the theme a bit better. The top image is a good example of this and it's framed really nicely as well.
The first two images are really successful and well composed. I like the perspective you captured in photo two from the angle of the performer and the higher view of the crowd.
The third image absolutely captures the event. The energy of the music and dance makes the viewer feel like they are there. Think that image is the most successful.
I think there is an interesting division of more focused/close-up photos starting from the 5th one and more general compositions of photos 1-4. But the fact that there is an ongoing feeling of calmness and joy just links them all together.
I feel like you shifted your gaze half way through from the crowds to the eating. If you had done your entire shot just on everyone's expression with their meals that could have been awesome! I know when i go to these things I spend most of the time scoping out the best vendor and can't wait to dive in. The shots you did get of this capture great expression and are tied together really well
Your capturing of the emotions of spectators is very successful. You can tell people are having a good time because of their body language. It was bold of you to go up and ask people if you could take a picture of them eating, but those shots are really fun.
The three photos of everyone eating I think are the most successful. The compositions are cropped nicely and it’s entertaining to see everyone’s expressions. What would be cool is to play more on the before and afters of a party since your ending photo is a result of all of the food and event goers.
The photos of the band performing and people dancing around them are the most successful, in my opinion. I think these successfully display a joyful and energetic mood. Maybe if you had given those photos a longer exposure, it would've captured the movement of people more successfully.
The top image is great, but I'm very partial to panoramic images. You have a really good eye; the majority of these feel really well considered and have a professional vibe. The tenth image feels out of place as far as the subject matter is concerned, which is unfortunate because I think the "aftermath" of an event would have been a cool focus.
ReplyDeleteThe more natural, less posed pictures are my favorites. I think they fit the theme a bit better. The top image is a good example of this and it's framed really nicely as well.
ReplyDeleteThe first two images are really successful and well composed. I like the perspective you captured in photo two from the angle of the performer and the higher view of the crowd.
ReplyDeleteThe third image absolutely captures the event. The energy of the music and dance makes the viewer feel like they are there. Think that image is the most successful.
ReplyDeleteI think there is an interesting division of more focused/close-up photos starting from the 5th one and more general compositions of photos 1-4. But the fact that there is an ongoing feeling of calmness and joy just links them all together.
ReplyDeleteI feel like you shifted your gaze half way through from the crowds to the eating. If you had done your entire shot just on everyone's expression with their meals that could have been awesome! I know when i go to these things I spend most of the time scoping out the best vendor and can't wait to dive in. The shots you did get of this capture great expression and are tied together really well
ReplyDeleteYour capturing of the emotions of spectators is very successful. You can tell people are having a good time because of their body language. It was bold of you to go up and ask people if you could take a picture of them eating, but those shots are really fun.
ReplyDeleteAlso what event was this?
ReplyDeleteThe three photos of everyone eating I think are the most successful. The compositions are cropped nicely and it’s entertaining to see everyone’s expressions. What would be cool is to play more on the before and afters of a party since your ending photo is a result of all of the food and event goers.
ReplyDeleteThe photos of the band performing and people dancing around them are the most successful, in my opinion. I think these successfully display a joyful and energetic mood. Maybe if you had given those photos a longer exposure, it would've captured the movement of people more successfully.
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