These photos work well as a narrative, which makes them feel like a cohesive whole. The third one down is an accurate effect of the sort of environment you're photographing. I think that image should have been somewhere in the middle and the surrounding images would lead up to that one, and then wind down from it, if that makes any sense. 7th image is the best.
Your photos are the only ones I've seen this week that tell a story. They're increasingly gritty and decreasingly glamorous from start to finish and the way you arranged them is effective. I think the third photo might have been better placed further down the line, maybe right before the car pic.
These photos take the viewer on a fun journey and tell a story. The interesting angles and close cropping on all of the images makes this set of photos really successful, as well the the consistent theme and the level contrast.
These photos as a whole really work together to tell a story. Even though each photograph remains tight you can really tell the series of events that can unfold during a night out.
The texture of the blueberries is wonderful! Certain items such as the champagne bottle, perfect teeth, and vape pen cue into certain indicators of the social group that make up your subject matter. That is what is most interesting to me and I think continuing to capture those things would be nice.
You told this party narrative very nicely. I love how you captured the little moments and details of your night, I think those photos tell much more about the emotion and mood of the event (like photos 5,7, and 9). The way you experimented with shallow depth of field and even shots looking upward really enhances the narrative.
These photos work well as a narrative, which makes them feel like a cohesive whole. The third one down is an accurate effect of the sort of environment you're photographing. I think that image should have been somewhere in the middle and the surrounding images would lead up to that one, and then wind down from it, if that makes any sense. 7th image is the best.
ReplyDeleteYour photos are the only ones I've seen this week that tell a story. They're increasingly gritty and decreasingly glamorous from start to finish and the way you arranged them is effective. I think the third photo might have been better placed further down the line, maybe right before the car pic.
ReplyDeleteThese photos take the viewer on a fun journey and tell a story. The interesting angles and close cropping on all of the images makes this set of photos really successful, as well the the consistent theme and the level contrast.
ReplyDeleteThese photos as a whole really work together to tell a story. Even though each photograph remains tight you can really tell the series of events that can unfold during a night out.
ReplyDeleteThese photos really give an insight to the story behind them. Your prespectives and the ongoing contrast scheme wroked perfectly.
ReplyDeleteThe texture of the blueberries is wonderful! Certain items such as the champagne bottle, perfect teeth, and vape pen cue into certain indicators of the social group that make up your subject matter. That is what is most interesting to me and I think continuing to capture those things would be nice.
ReplyDeleteYou told this party narrative very nicely. I love how you captured the little moments and details of your night, I think those photos tell much more about the emotion and mood of the event (like photos 5,7, and 9). The way you experimented with shallow depth of field and even shots looking upward really enhances the narrative.
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