There's a solid relationship between a lot of the photos in this set; dark interior spaces that use light to create "lines". I think the two images of the plants can be replaced with photos that follow that theme.
There is really nice contrast in the photos with light, like in the photos ten and four. The photos of plants are well framed, but confuse the story you are telling with the other images and feel out of place.
I can't quite tell a story from these photographs but each photo individually is strong. I like the light glow from the bulb lights in the 4th image. That one is probably my favorite because the subject is a little more dynamic than the rest.
The plant photos seem to throw off the theme. Some of the pictures give a more serene and uneventful feel that makes it hard to tell what was going on. The lighting and framing is nice especially in the third picture.
The photos seperately strongly pass the mood behind them to the viewer. However, I cannot identify a specific theme that links all the presented photos even though there is a certain connection between photos 1,3, 4,5 and 10.
I agree with my peers in saying that half of your photos set a particular mood while the random shots of plants throw me off. Even if they were in the same location or time, the way you shot them (lighting/composition) so differently only separates them more from the group. I really like the white lines running throughout the interior shots, it's very visually unifying.
I agree, it would be nice to see more scenes of the specific event, but you do capture a sense of the space you were in. The settings for lighting you used were successful
The photos inside the venue conveys a really nice mood. Although the plants are disctracting. There’s a focus on what’s around you rather than what’s actually happening. You did well balancing the lights in a low light situation.
Your use of contrast in the indoor photos really enhances your story and quality of photos. I think if you focused more on finding that contrast between the darkness of the space and the lights that were placed there, your story could be even stronger.
There's a solid relationship between a lot of the photos in this set; dark interior spaces that use light to create "lines". I think the two images of the plants can be replaced with photos that follow that theme.
ReplyDeleteThere is really nice contrast in the photos with light, like in the photos ten and four. The photos of plants are well framed, but confuse the story you are telling with the other images and feel out of place.
ReplyDeleteI can't quite tell a story from these photographs but each photo individually is strong. I like the light glow from the bulb lights in the 4th image. That one is probably my favorite because the subject is a little more dynamic than the rest.
ReplyDeleteThe plant photos seem to throw off the theme. Some of the pictures give a more serene and uneventful feel that makes it hard to tell what was going on. The lighting and framing is nice especially in the third picture.
ReplyDeleteThe photos seperately strongly pass the mood behind them to the viewer. However, I cannot identify a specific theme that links all the presented photos even though there is a certain connection between photos 1,3, 4,5 and 10.
ReplyDeleteI agree with my peers in saying that half of your photos set a particular mood while the random shots of plants throw me off. Even if they were in the same location or time, the way you shot them (lighting/composition) so differently only separates them more from the group. I really like the white lines running throughout the interior shots, it's very visually unifying.
ReplyDeleteI agree, it would be nice to see more scenes of the specific event, but you do capture a sense of the space you were in. The settings for lighting you used were successful
ReplyDeleteThe photos inside the venue conveys a really nice mood. Although the plants are disctracting. There’s a focus on what’s around you rather than what’s actually happening. You did well balancing the lights in a low light situation.
ReplyDeleteYour use of contrast in the indoor photos really enhances your story and quality of photos. I think if you focused more on finding that contrast between the darkness of the space and the lights that were placed there, your story could be even stronger.
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