This looks like two events more so than a single event. Both environments are photographed nicely, and it looks like you adapted your style to capture each one. The canoe photos feel much more loose, open and natural. And the library(?) photos feel very cramped and rigid.
All of your images are composed and framed well. I'm getting two very different moods from the two environments and the way you framed your images helped create that.
The whole collection seems to represent the sort of main setting of Gainesville; education, knowledge, activism from the university and the rich, biologically unique ecosystem that supports us. The stairway in the eighth picture seems to go nowhere really contributes to the geometrical, rigid motif seen in the indoor pictures.
Your showing two different types of images that tell two different stories. If they are related, I wonder how you could have connected them. The order of the images confuses the story of the event, going from outside to inside, and back and forth. Your images individually are well framed and have nice contrast, but lack cohesiveness as a whole.
There seems to be a separation between events based off of your photographs as a whole. I do like how your photographs could just illustrate a day in Gainesville. I do like the contrast between the outside photos versus the inside photos.
I will agree with the already mentioned comments that there seems to be a separation of photos introducing two different events. Yet, they both work very good in terms of constructing a specific peaceful mood and passing it to the viewer.
I have to agree with my peers on the fact that you shot two completely different environments or events. However, I'm really happy that you actually brought your camera out on to the water with you. My favorite image is of you in the back of the canoe with your partner in the foreground (#7) because I feel that I am getting led into the space and could step right inside.
I love your images of the CMC because that place is amazing, but I would suggest you take pictures of some action there rather than the still interior. Your shot of the back of the person in the canoe is great because of the light and dark split of the river on both sides of the canoe, and then the light paddle over the dark side.
Two different events offputs your top 10 as a whole set of work. I think your more successful pieces are while canoeing. They’re much more free and the lighting works well in all of them. I enjoy the photo with the central canoe, the trees help frame the composition while the light can be seen reflected off the water.
This looks like two events more so than a single event. Both environments are photographed nicely, and it looks like you adapted your style to capture each one. The canoe photos feel much more loose, open and natural. And the library(?) photos feel very cramped and rigid.
ReplyDeleteAll of your images are composed and framed well. I'm getting two very different moods from the two environments and the way you framed your images helped create that.
ReplyDeleteThe whole collection seems to represent the sort of main setting of Gainesville; education, knowledge, activism from the university and the rich, biologically unique ecosystem that supports us. The stairway in the eighth picture seems to go nowhere really contributes to the geometrical, rigid motif seen in the indoor pictures.
ReplyDeleteYour showing two different types of images that tell two different stories. If they are related, I wonder how you could have connected them. The order of the images confuses the story of the event, going from outside to inside, and back and forth. Your images individually are well framed and have nice contrast, but lack cohesiveness as a whole.
ReplyDeleteThere seems to be a separation between events based off of your photographs as a whole. I do like how your photographs could just illustrate a day in Gainesville. I do like the contrast between the outside photos versus the inside photos.
ReplyDeleteI will agree with the already mentioned comments that there seems to be a separation of photos introducing two different events. Yet, they both work very good in terms of constructing a specific peaceful mood and passing it to the viewer.
ReplyDeleteI have to agree with my peers on the fact that you shot two completely different environments or events. However, I'm really happy that you actually brought your camera out on to the water with you. My favorite image is of you in the back of the canoe with your partner in the foreground (#7) because I feel that I am getting led into the space and could step right inside.
ReplyDeleteI love your images of the CMC because that place is amazing, but I would suggest you take pictures of some action there rather than the still interior. Your shot of the back of the person in the canoe is great because of the light and dark split of the river on both sides of the canoe, and then the light paddle over the dark side.
ReplyDeleteTwo different events offputs your top 10 as a whole set of work. I think your more successful pieces are while canoeing. They’re much more free and the lighting works well in all of them. I enjoy the photo with the central canoe, the trees help frame the composition while the light can be seen reflected off the water.
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