I really like your 1st and 9th photos. The reflection on the aluminum cans create a nice contrast in value in the photograph especially against the the softer appearance of the leaves and bags. The symmetry in the 9th photo is visually pleasing especially with the diagonal lines working towards a horizon.
I love how most of your photos tell some sort of narrative about your day. Photos 1, 3, and 8 are the strongest in telling a narrative, in my opinion. They're very different from each other, and I think that adds depth to your narrative because of their ambiguous connection to each other.
I think image number one is very poignant. Choosing to take a picture of your bedroom floor puts you in a place of openness and vulnerability. It allows the audience an insight into the intimate details of your life.
The first photo is really strong. The contrast in textures and the full range of values make it one of the strongest in my opinion. You seem to be hinting at a narrative as well which is interesting but could be pushed more if you're intending to tell a story.
Photo nine is a really nice perspective and sense of depth. The texture in photo ten is really nice and clear, I wish photo seven had better clarity because it also had some really nice textures.
Your ninth photo is one of the strongest due to it’s perspective and composition. I appreciate how you went on a journey and your photo series documents that sense of local exploration. A few of your shots are blurry so maybe propping the camera against something since carrying a tripod on a bike is impractical
I cannot disagree with the fact that the 9th photo is very strong due to its perspective and composition. I think the interesting combination of horizontal and vertical lines is what made it so distinguishable.
If photo 7 was more in focus I think it wouldve been a stronger image with really rich texture. Nice job at creating a feeling of tension, chaos, and suspense in the 8th photo. I think overall you could use a little more contrast, especially in photo 5.
The first photo is your strongest photo. The reflection of the light of the bags and cans brings the composition to life. Some photos such as photos 5 and 6 could use more of a push of light, as in the 5th photo most of the values all seem within the same range.
I really like your 1st and 9th photos. The reflection on the aluminum cans create a nice contrast in value in the photograph especially against the the softer appearance of the leaves and bags. The symmetry in the 9th photo is visually pleasing especially with the diagonal lines working towards a horizon.
ReplyDeleteI love how most of your photos tell some sort of narrative about your day. Photos 1, 3, and 8 are the strongest in telling a narrative, in my opinion. They're very different from each other, and I think that adds depth to your narrative because of their ambiguous connection to each other.
ReplyDeleteI think image number one is very poignant. Choosing to take a picture of your bedroom floor puts you in a place of openness and vulnerability. It allows the audience an insight into the intimate details of your life.
ReplyDeleteThank you
DeleteThe first photo is really strong. The contrast in textures and the full range of values make it one of the strongest in my opinion. You seem to be hinting at a narrative as well which is interesting but could be pushed more if you're intending to tell a story.
ReplyDeletePhoto nine is a really nice perspective and sense of depth. The texture in photo ten is really nice and clear, I wish photo seven had better clarity because it also had some really nice textures.
ReplyDeleteYour ninth photo is one of the strongest due to it’s perspective and composition. I appreciate how you went on a journey and your photo series documents that sense of local exploration. A few of your shots are blurry so maybe propping the camera against something since carrying a tripod on a bike is impractical
ReplyDeleteI cannot disagree with the fact that the 9th photo is very strong due to its perspective and composition. I think the interesting combination of horizontal and vertical lines is what made it so distinguishable.
ReplyDeleteIf photo 7 was more in focus I think it wouldve been a stronger image with really rich texture. Nice job at creating a feeling of tension, chaos, and suspense in the 8th photo. I think overall you could use a little more contrast, especially in photo 5.
ReplyDeleteThe first photo is your strongest photo. The reflection of the light of the bags and cans brings the composition to life. Some photos such as photos 5 and 6 could use more of a push of light, as in the 5th photo most of the values all seem within the same range.
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