Most of your photos could benefit from upping the contrast/brightness since most of them don't have a true white. Maybe try experimenting with the levels control in photoshop. For what I'm assuming is your leading lines image, if you had put a subject at then end of the beams it would have instantly made the photo more interesting from a person to a chair or something of that nature.
I can definitely tell you were experimenting with the design elements with these. I think your use of design elements is most evident in photos 2 and 10, where you used repetition and symmetry pretty well.
Contrast seems to be one of the design elements that is missing and could strengthen all of your pictures. In photo 7, it seems like you tried to use leading lines but I think the lines should be leading to a subject.
I you are aiming for symmetry on photo ten, I think it would benefit from being zoomed into and thus focusing more on the shapes of the front of the truck-the background is not very relevant. The second photo could be more interesting if taken from a more daring angle. Try to get texture more at an angle in the seventh photo.
I think majority of your photos would have benefited from stronger contrast. Many of the design principles, namely: repetition, leading lines, balance and symmetry are pretty obvious in photos 2,7,9,10.
Most of your photos could benefit from upping the contrast/brightness since most of them don't have a true white. Maybe try experimenting with the levels control in photoshop. For what I'm assuming is your leading lines image, if you had put a subject at then end of the beams it would have instantly made the photo more interesting from a person to a chair or something of that nature.
ReplyDeleteYour value range is very rich in your photos. As a series, these feel very connected with the exception of photo 8, which feels a little out of place.
ReplyDeleteI can definitely tell you were experimenting with the design elements with these. I think your use of design elements is most evident in photos 2 and 10, where you used repetition and symmetry pretty well.
ReplyDeleteContrast seems to be one of the design elements that is missing and could strengthen all of your pictures. In photo 7, it seems like you tried to use leading lines but I think the lines should be leading to a subject.
ReplyDeleteI you are aiming for symmetry on photo ten, I think it would benefit from being zoomed into and thus focusing more on the shapes of the front of the truck-the background is not very relevant. The second photo could be more interesting if taken from a more daring angle. Try to get texture more at an angle in the seventh photo.
ReplyDeleteI think majority of your photos would have benefited from stronger contrast. Many of the design principles, namely: repetition, leading lines, balance and symmetry are pretty obvious in photos 2,7,9,10.
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