I think the playfulness of these is really successful. Photo 3 is working the best due to the strong leading line of the wood planks, and I think you could make it even better by cropping it to a closer composition. I also think photo 9 is strong, but it is a bit overexposed on her skin.
There is a really nice variety to your compositions, and these images are outstanding and are visually very striking. The quality of some of them could be better, some are grey like photo one, and blown out a little in nine, but the way your are composing them is really successful. The costumes and use of props is working well and the location was a good choice.
Each photo really excites me because I never know what action and statement will be made next. I think every photograph would be even stronger with a wider range of tones and contrast. I also like your play with color too.
I like the playfulness and characterization of the figure and tones in these photos. I think the contrast needs to be a bit stronger. Using color too adds another dimension of contrast as well, such as in the 4th photo.
I think the playfulness of these is really successful. Photo 3 is working the best due to the strong leading line of the wood planks, and I think you could make it even better by cropping it to a closer composition. I also think photo 9 is strong, but it is a bit overexposed on her skin.
ReplyDeleteThere is a really nice variety to your compositions, and these images are outstanding and are visually very striking. The quality of some of them could be better, some are grey like photo one, and blown out a little in nine, but the way your are composing them is really successful. The costumes and use of props is working well and the location was a good choice.
ReplyDeleteEach photo really excites me because I never know what action and statement will be made next. I think every photograph would be even stronger with a wider range of tones and contrast. I also like your play with color too.
ReplyDeleteI like the playfulness and characterization of the figure and tones in these photos. I think the contrast needs to be a bit stronger. Using color too adds another dimension of contrast as well, such as in the 4th photo.
ReplyDeleteThe difference between your compostitions is really appealing. I also admire your play with color.
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