I think it's a cool concept to explore a single object from multiple different angles. I think picking even more unconventional angles would help enhance the variety of your images (6, 8, and 10 are somewhat similar)
I didn't realize that these were all the DNA bridge at first (which i suppose is your intention) but the fact that three of your images are quite similar broke the illusion. If you're going to shoot different interpretations of one object make them unrecognizable from each other and maybe play with different times of day as well
The contrast is really high in these photos, there is little to no grey in some of them, creating really striking and bold images. Photo ten has great repetition and photo 5 has nice symmetry and leading lines. You could try to experiment with distorting your images further, similar to how some are blurred or have light trails and continue to try different angles.
It seems like you focused on pattern, line, and movement in these photos. They are bold and striking with the high contrast. Perhaps began to think of how you can introduce concepts into your photos.
Your play with lines is highlighted through the high contrast in each photo. I like that you played with longer exposure times so maybe distort the lines further with different techniques like that.
Your use of light and contrast is strong throughout all of your photos. You did a good job in getting different angles and perspectives of just one area. I think you would benefit for using more long exposure techniques.
The inclusion of the spider photo (image 9) really makes the narrative of the series come together. Looking at these I started thinking of the natural chaos and order of the world, which I think you were pushing through these.
I think it's a cool concept to explore a single object from multiple different angles. I think picking even more unconventional angles would help enhance the variety of your images (6, 8, and 10 are somewhat similar)
ReplyDeleteI didn't realize that these were all the DNA bridge at first (which i suppose is your intention) but the fact that three of your images are quite similar broke the illusion. If you're going to shoot different interpretations of one object make them unrecognizable from each other and maybe play with different times of day as well
ReplyDeleteThe contrast is really high in these photos, there is little to no grey in some of them, creating really striking and bold images. Photo ten has great repetition and photo 5 has nice symmetry and leading lines. You could try to experiment with distorting your images further, similar to how some are blurred or have light trails and continue to try different angles.
ReplyDeleteIt seems like you focused on pattern, line, and movement in these photos. They are bold and striking with the high contrast. Perhaps began to think of how you can introduce concepts into your photos.
ReplyDeleteYour play with lines is highlighted through the high contrast in each photo. I like that you played with longer exposure times so maybe distort the lines further with different techniques like that.
ReplyDeleteYour use of light and contrast is strong throughout all of your photos. You did a good job in getting different angles and perspectives of just one area. I think you would benefit for using more long exposure techniques.
ReplyDeleteThe inclusion of the spider photo (image 9) really makes the narrative of the series come together. Looking at these I started thinking of the natural chaos and order of the world, which I think you were pushing through these.
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