The position of the subjects body in the last photo is really interesting. All of these photos are really nice. I would say to try some more angles and compositions in the 2nd set because about half of them have the subject in a similar position.
I agree with Kylee,there could be more variety in your compositions and depths of field. I really like the images with the plastic bags, but I would consider trying different setups and object interactions for your next set of images.
Your 3rd photo has a great tonal contrast. I think your other images will be strengthened with a darker background to really exaggerate the plastic bag's highlights and the model's skin tone.
Image 7 is a great example of how you used photoshop to enhance your original photos to get the point of suffocation and chaos across. I can see you were trying to do the same thing with image 4 but the eyes feel like stickers as opposed to someone looking through the bag, maybe try using the patch/healing brush tool to copy the surrounding creases and wrinkles form the original
The multiple eyes, and repeated elements make interesting compositions. I think ou would benefit from using more bags and exaggerate the plastic materiality.
The repeating eyes work really well in the composition. I think your last photo is very interesting but it differs from the other images being a little excluded from the general collection.
The position of the subjects body in the last photo is really interesting. All of these photos are really nice. I would say to try some more angles and compositions in the 2nd set because about half of them have the subject in a similar position.
ReplyDeleteI agree with Kylee,there could be more variety in your compositions and depths of field. I really like the images with the plastic bags, but I would consider trying different setups and object interactions for your next set of images.
ReplyDeleteYour 3rd photo has a great tonal contrast. I think your other images will be strengthened with a darker background to really exaggerate the plastic bag's highlights and the model's skin tone.
ReplyDeleteImage 7 is a great example of how you used photoshop to enhance your original photos to get the point of suffocation and chaos across. I can see you were trying to do the same thing with image 4 but the eyes feel like stickers as opposed to someone looking through the bag, maybe try using the patch/healing brush tool to copy the surrounding creases and wrinkles form the original
ReplyDeleteThe multiple eyes, and repeated elements make interesting compositions. I think ou would benefit from using more bags and exaggerate the plastic materiality.
ReplyDeleteThe repeating eyes work really well in the composition. I think your last photo is very interesting but it differs from the other images being a little excluded from the general collection.
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