Your repetitive use of patterns throughout this series is working really well. Some photos appear to be a bit flat because they lack a strong contrast between whites and blacks, so maybe you could try increasing the contrast even more during editing to enhance your photos.
It seems like you were focused on texture and pattern this week, which you captured successfully. Some of these are out of focus so I would suggest using a tripod or just stabilizing your camera by finding something nearby to prop your camera up on if you're in a pinch. That's a problem I'm trying to fix in my photos too, and I'm finding that that helps.
Your images feel very cohesive in the way they all show repetition and pattern. Your camera angles were really strong, as well as your compositions. Photos 2, 4, 6, and 9 I think were your most successful images this week, I particularity like the abstract quality of these four images.
There's a great sense of repetition in these. It's apparent in the first and third photos, too, but perhaps not executed as well as the rest of the images.
I would agree with others in terms of your depiction of repetition and pattern throughout the collection. I think a little more contrast in photo 6 would have made it more effective.
If the fourth picture had the dirt road cropped out I think it could provide more severe contrast to strengthen the composition. Other than that one, most of your pictures utilize contrast to make the patterns and repetition more defined.
Your repetitive use of patterns throughout this series is working really well. Some photos appear to be a bit flat because they lack a strong contrast between whites and blacks, so maybe you could try increasing the contrast even more during editing to enhance your photos.
ReplyDeleteIt seems like you were focused on texture and pattern this week, which you captured successfully. Some of these are out of focus so I would suggest using a tripod or just stabilizing your camera by finding something nearby to prop your camera up on if you're in a pinch. That's a problem I'm trying to fix in my photos too, and I'm finding that that helps.
ReplyDeleteYour images feel very cohesive in the way they all show repetition and pattern. Your camera angles were really strong, as well as your compositions. Photos 2, 4, 6, and 9 I think were your most successful images this week, I particularity like the abstract quality of these four images.
ReplyDeleteTheres a good sense of repetition in most of these photos. I feel that the contrast and values can be pushed more, as photos 5 and 9 are mostly grey.
ReplyDeleteGreat use of pattern. Some images are a bit blurry (the last one). So I'd watch out for that. Think of ways to get more value on the inside shots.
ReplyDeleteThere's a great sense of repetition in these. It's apparent in the first and third photos, too, but perhaps not executed as well as the rest of the images.
ReplyDeleteI would agree with others in terms of your depiction of repetition and pattern throughout the collection. I think a little more contrast in photo 6 would have made it more effective.
ReplyDeleteIf the fourth picture had the dirt road cropped out I think it could provide more severe contrast to strengthen the composition. Other than that one, most of your pictures utilize contrast to make the patterns and repetition more defined.
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