All of these work really well as they are. I can't actually think of anything I would want to see changed. They're all very crisp with a full value range and good contrast. You also created a mood, which I appreciate.
These photos are visually striking because of your contrast from image to image and the overall range in hues. I think you could have maybe explored more with some other design techniques like symmetry and repetition maybe in the buildings.
I would definitely agree that these images tell an interesting narrative, are well composed, and have great contrast. The use of depth of field creates really nice contrast between areas that are in focus and those that are not, like in photo 6.
The light and contrast in all the images are crisp and clean. The narrative seems comical in a way which makes it clear that you've had fun with the assignment and model. The sense of being wasted and compositional cropping in image 2 is great. I think image 9 is the weakest in terms of composition as the subject almost feels lost.
Very creative and interesting photoshoot. I assume you shot it at sunset maybe? I'm not sure, but you captured some nice shadows in the figurative shots. It seems like you used most of the design elements. Consider ideas of balance even more
I think almost all of these are great. The camera angles and portraiture is really well done. That being said, I'm not particularly fond of image number 1. It feels too deadpan compared to the others, and it's very similar to the pose in image number 9, which is much more dynamic.
The repetition created through the striped sweater of the model makes photo 1 very interesting even under the circumstances that the general angle is rather static compared to the other ones. I think you can explore more the ideas of balance and pattern.
I feel inspired to experiment with much crazier poses after seeing these. The values are very well balanced in all of them. I think some more directed lighting on the models face in the fourth picture could make it look less grey.
All of these work really well as they are. I can't actually think of anything I would want to see changed. They're all very crisp with a full value range and good contrast. You also created a mood, which I appreciate.
ReplyDeleteThese photos are visually striking because of your contrast from image to image and the overall range in hues. I think you could have maybe explored more with some other design techniques like symmetry and repetition maybe in the buildings.
ReplyDeleteI would definitely agree that these images tell an interesting narrative, are well composed, and have great contrast. The use of depth of field creates really nice contrast between areas that are in focus and those that are not, like in photo 6.
ReplyDeleteThe light and contrast in all the images are crisp and clean. The narrative seems comical in a way which makes it clear that you've had fun with the assignment and model. The sense of being wasted and compositional cropping in image 2 is great. I think image 9 is the weakest in terms of composition as the subject almost feels lost.
ReplyDeleteVery creative and interesting photoshoot. I assume you shot it at sunset maybe? I'm not sure, but you captured some nice shadows in the figurative shots. It seems like you used most of the design elements. Consider ideas of balance even more
ReplyDeleteI think almost all of these are great. The camera angles and portraiture is really well done. That being said, I'm not particularly fond of image number 1. It feels too deadpan compared to the others, and it's very similar to the pose in image number 9, which is much more dynamic.
ReplyDeleteThe repetition created through the striped sweater of the model makes photo 1 very interesting even under the circumstances that the general angle is rather static compared to the other ones. I think you can explore more the ideas of balance and pattern.
ReplyDeleteI feel inspired to experiment with much crazier poses after seeing these. The values are very well balanced in all of them. I think some more directed lighting on the models face in the fourth picture could make it look less grey.
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