You captured line and pattern well in photo 7. Photo 8 also has a nice use of contrast, making it interesting to look at. You could probably increase the contrast greatly in all of your photos to enhance them, however. A lot of your outdoor photos lack contrast due to the flatness of the greenery, so maybe when you're shooting outdoors look for either a very light or dark surface to create contrast.
The seventh and eighth photos have a lot of contrast, which I think some of the others could benefit from. The outdoors pics have a lot of texture going on that's lost in grey.
Your photos capture layers of texture and overlapping lines that create visually appealing compositions. Many of your photos have an overall grey tone so maybe going in to photoshop and darkening/highlighting certain parts of the image will improve the contrast.
Photo 7 shows the design element leading lines really well and photo 8 has great contrast and texture. Photo ten has nice repetition of the tires, but could use more contrast. I agree with the other comments that your images are compositionally strong with week, but could have a larger value range throughout.
Your tenth photo(s) have a good sense of balance and pattern. Keep in mind the time of day you take photos at and the light source to get more value range and shadows.
the use of pattern and line are most successful in photos 1, 3, and 7. In photo 1 the idea of looking through a window and capturing that window designs an interesting composition. Its similar to 3 photos in one. I think all of your photos could use more contrast as they all seem close in value.
The overlapping lines and textures in photo 7 as well as your use of leading lines in photo 6 in the process of creating repetition seem to be successful. Yet, I think the latter would have benefitted from higher contrast.
The tenth picture captures texture and leading lines well. Many of your pictures look more gray so I think maybe a less diffused source of light could help bring out the textures and patterns more.
You captured line and pattern well in photo 7. Photo 8 also has a nice use of contrast, making it interesting to look at. You could probably increase the contrast greatly in all of your photos to enhance them, however. A lot of your outdoor photos lack contrast due to the flatness of the greenery, so maybe when you're shooting outdoors look for either a very light or dark surface to create contrast.
ReplyDeleteThe seventh and eighth photos have a lot of contrast, which I think some of the others could benefit from. The outdoors pics have a lot of texture going on that's lost in grey.
ReplyDeleteYour photos capture layers of texture and overlapping lines that create visually appealing compositions. Many of your photos have an overall grey tone so maybe going in to photoshop and darkening/highlighting certain parts of the image will improve the contrast.
ReplyDeletePhoto 7 shows the design element leading lines really well and photo 8 has great contrast and texture. Photo ten has nice repetition of the tires, but could use more contrast. I agree with the other comments that your images are compositionally strong with week, but could have a larger value range throughout.
ReplyDeleteYour tenth photo(s) have a good sense of balance and pattern. Keep in mind the time of day you take photos at and the light source to get more value range and shadows.
ReplyDeletethe use of pattern and line are most successful in photos 1, 3, and 7. In photo 1 the idea of looking through a window and capturing that window designs an interesting composition. Its similar to 3 photos in one. I think all of your photos could use more contrast as they all seem close in value.
ReplyDeleteThe overlapping lines and textures in photo 7 as well as your use of leading lines in photo 6 in the process of creating repetition seem to be successful. Yet, I think the latter would have benefitted from higher contrast.
ReplyDeleteThe tenth picture captures texture and leading lines well. Many of your pictures look more gray so I think maybe a less diffused source of light could help bring out the textures and patterns more.
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