The last photo is going in such a good direction! I love the repetition and warping going on in the background as well as the colors. Maybe you could make some of those colors reflect through the light streaks in her sunglasses but keep the rest of her black and white?
There is a lot of grey in some of your images, 1, 2, 4, and 5, adding some contrast while you edit would really compliment the interesting collages you create with your images. I like the movement you create with distortion and repetition. These are strong images that work together and have a cohesive aesthetic and theme.
I think some of the collages get a little lost with the low contrast in your photos. I would just up the contrast a little bit and I think your collages will be much more striking. I also really like your 9th image, the cut out shadow is a nice contrast with the shadows of the structures.
Image 3 is confusing in your grouping of images. I can see its slight connection to the last image but would definitely use the sense of warping that you did with the last in the 3rd as well. It feels very flat right now especially with the flattened out cartoon.
Your use of repetition is strong in theses photos. Photo 10 is the most successful. Try to also isolate the subject in color while keeping the background black and white.
The last photo is going in such a good direction! I love the repetition and warping going on in the background as well as the colors. Maybe you could make some of those colors reflect through the light streaks in her sunglasses but keep the rest of her black and white?
ReplyDeleteThere is a lot of grey in some of your images, 1, 2, 4, and 5, adding some contrast while you edit would really compliment the interesting collages you create with your images. I like the movement you create with distortion and repetition. These are strong images that work together and have a cohesive aesthetic and theme.
ReplyDeleteI think some of the collages get a little lost with the low contrast in your photos. I would just up the contrast a little bit and I think your collages will be much more striking. I also really like your 9th image, the cut out shadow is a nice contrast with the shadows of the structures.
ReplyDeleteImage 3 is confusing in your grouping of images. I can see its slight connection to the last image but would definitely use the sense of warping that you did with the last in the 3rd as well. It feels very flat right now especially with the flattened out cartoon.
ReplyDeleteYour use of repetition is strong in theses photos. Photo 10 is the most successful. Try to also isolate the subject in color while keeping the background black and white.
ReplyDeleteI think your last photo is truly amazing whereas image 3 might be a little out of context.
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