I like that there are three distinctive "events" (shoots), and to me they seem sequential. There's not a whole lot of variety within each shoot, though.
The shoots in the water are stunning especially with the bright highlights along the roundness of her face in photo #10. However all ten of these could have been condensed to maybe 3 or 4 photographs because it feels like just different angles of the same thing. Try staging at least two more scenes with your model!
These are looking good and the concept is coming through. Your last couple of photos are really interesting with her head floating in the water. The first few photos show a struggle and in the rest the figure appears almost serene. Think about what sort of emotions and body positions you would like the subject to engage in to drive your point home.
You have a great eye/ sense when planning out stages for your model. I would try to explore even harsher angles and have your model attempt crazier more angular poses, especially in the first 3 photos, that would provide even more tension.
Photos 8 and 10 are stunning, great use of light and contrast. Her body submerged with the plastic and leaves are definitely communicating strong ideas. The angles in the first few photos are interesting but I think if you had more plastic wrap or used plastic bags as well they would have been stronger.
Your use of light in these is amazing. I love the small spotlight on her body and face that only gives the viewer a glimpse of her persona. You captured the state of feeling overwhelmed and worthless quite well through these.
Your manipulation of the light as well as cohesive seperation of both the photoshoots and story line is amazing. I also admire your use of objects and the setting.
I like that there are three distinctive "events" (shoots), and to me they seem sequential. There's not a whole lot of variety within each shoot, though.
ReplyDeleteThe shoots in the water are stunning especially with the bright highlights along the roundness of her face in photo #10. However all ten of these could have been condensed to maybe 3 or 4 photographs because it feels like just different angles of the same thing. Try staging at least two more scenes with your model!
ReplyDeleteThese are looking good and the concept is coming through. Your last couple of photos are really interesting with her head floating in the water. The first few photos show a struggle and in the rest the figure appears almost serene. Think about what sort of emotions and body positions you would like the subject to engage in to drive your point home.
ReplyDeleteYou have a great eye/ sense when planning out stages for your model. I would try to explore even harsher angles and have your model attempt crazier more angular poses, especially in the first 3 photos, that would provide even more tension.
ReplyDeletePhotos 8 and 10 are stunning, great use of light and contrast. Her body submerged with the plastic and leaves are definitely communicating strong ideas. The angles in the first few photos are interesting but I think if you had more plastic wrap or used plastic bags as well they would have been stronger.
ReplyDeleteYour use of light in these is amazing. I love the small spotlight on her body and face that only gives the viewer a glimpse of her persona. You captured the state of feeling overwhelmed and worthless quite well through these.
ReplyDeleteYour manipulation of the light as well as cohesive seperation of both the photoshoots and story line is amazing. I also admire your use of objects and the setting.
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